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» Poem: advice to the young
advice to the young
written by DontFearAConcequence
02:06 AM 10/28/04
advice to the young who are yet green
follow your heart and follow your dreams

don't let anyone interfere with your hopes
whatever you do don't dangle your regrets on a rope

advice to the young having trouble with peers
dont let them make you cry, they arent worth your tears

dont let them hurt you dont take things too hard
watch your own back, be your own gaurd

advice to the young dealing with a constant sad
dont let things build up inside, dont let things get you so mad

things will come up in life and you'll want to quit
when you want to give up, take a moment to sit

my advide to you is to always hold on
even though you dont see, life gets better as it goes on


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wish i could follow my own advice

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