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fallen and still falling
written by bloodlyvalentine12:26 PM 10/28/04i hate this life
cant you see
like a knife
its not easy
take me from this living hell
where ive burnt for 14 years
then my story you can tell
of my terror and my tears
its all just a fantasy
19 come then ill be gone
living here is my insanity
and the job is good and done |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
really old poem. i used to be into that whole 'it hAS to rhyme' thing
and this looks like the place for depressing poetry
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (10-28-2004 - 01:17 PM)
| i like all your poems dude |
by bloodlyvalentine (10-28-2004 - 01:23 PM)
| oh, ur online, i posted all my old stuff coz i was bored |
by Schizophrenic_broken (10-28-2004 - 01:58 PM)
| Yah I'm online sorry if that is a bad thing... DUDE... i like your poems |
by bloodlyvalentine (10-28-2004 - 02:35 PM)
| lol, not its not a bad thing |
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