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silently suffering
written by bloodlyvalentine01:06 PM 10/28/04why am i so unhappy
there is no reason for me to be
but yet i cant seem to break a smile
im scared of what'll happen to me
please help me, i need you now
i wandered off into a place somehow
im lost inside a fantasy
i cant find my way back to reality
i need you to come save me
before im swept away by insanity
im so afraid, so alone
i dont know what to do anymore
i know deep inside whats happening
but i dont want to admit anything
to know whats going on
but still to have no control
its tearing me apart
ruining my life
and its taking over so fast |
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kind of old. the end is really crap but
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (10-28-2004 - 01:18 PM)
| when did you write these, they are good |
by bloodlyvalentine (10-28-2004 - 01:25 PM)
| hehehehehe
like 2 years ago or something!!!! |
by Schizophrenic_broken (10-28-2004 - 01:57 PM)
| yah av u written new ones? Are the Nightworldy one new? I like them as well...dude
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by bloodlyvalentine (10-28-2004 - 02:32 PM)
| lol no, they're allllllllll old |
by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 07:12 PM)
| i am so going through that right now |
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