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» Poem: confused girlfriend
confused girlfriend
written by devil-dick
06:32 PM 10/28/04
what do i need to do to prove my self?
you treated me like a joke, but im still here.
you lied to me, and then deny you do it.
what is it? is it a hiden fear?
i wont hurt you, not lke you hurt me.
i wont push you away for fun.
you say your uncertain, but still play me around.
i only want to make you happy, i love you hun.
you want to get to know me, but you never show.
you wonder why im here? but you know the reason why.
im here for good, if you want me to stay.
but i need to know now, is this the last goodbye.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 06:36 PM)
Wow... ;;speechless;;....erm...I dunno what to say....You're such a great poet! ....

by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 06:36 PM)
i allways like your poems, yayness! hehe love, bubbles and blood ellie xxXxx

by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 06:39 PM)
kewl poem shows exactly how ur feelin lol

by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 06:41 PM)
thats a really good poem, i hope the girl u wrote it about knows how much u care and doesnt trest u like that 4 much longer, laura xx

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