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confused girlfriend #2
written by devil-dick06:54 PM 10/28/04what do you ask of me
what did i do wrong.
you know i care.
have we been a joke this long?
why do you do it?
am i just a game?
would it make you happy if i went?
why do you treat me so lame?
only you can know.
so tell me now.
what do you want from me.
how can i keep proven it, how?
if you tell me il do it.
if you want me gone ill say bye
just be straight with me.
im fed up being a lie. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xOBlaCkTeaRz_LP (10-28-2004 - 07:22 PM)
| would it make you happy if i went away ?
it does rhyme with lame just a suggestion |
by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 07:52 PM)
| hey hun
another great poem
though i thionk it would sound better if it was i hate being a lie instead of im fed up of being a lie...just my suggestion
xxXxx |
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