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FROM THE HEART, YOU WANTED IT YOU FUCK
written by bloodlyvalentine08:55 PM 11/3/04proper title for this poem is rose red
Rose Yellow
Rose White
Rose pink...
As i see your beautiful face
Remembering...
Memories that hurt me
Like the thorns on the rose i picked for you
As you smile your magickal smile
Saying....
Whispering horrible words
My happiness is dying like the rose i picked for you
As i see your deadly look
crying....
Screaming for some help
I pick the bottle to use against you
As i see your beautiful face now
dying....
Lifeless you lay now
Like the rose i picked for you
Rose yellow
Rose White
Rose Pink
I lay down this last rose...
...for you....
Rose Red. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
is this good enough for you, or woud you like some more WELL TOUGH YOUR GONNA HAVE TO GO FIND IT! COZ IM NOT POSTING ANYMORE OF THAT STUFF ON HER E COZ YOU DONT DESERVE TO READ IT, AND I DESERVE AT LEAST ONE RESPECTABLE, APPRECIATIVE FUCKING REPLY FOR IT WHICH I NEVER GET HERE
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloodlyvalentine (11-3-2004 - 08:59 PM)
| infact, i dont even want YOU to reply to this whatever your name is who thinks i cant write poetry that comes from the heart coz you cant reply to something so good. |
by juliasoul (11-3-2004 - 09:42 PM)
| whoa whoa whoa! harsh harsh. i don't kow who said that you can't write poetry. whoever it is doesn't know good poetry. i love the poem!-julia |
by DevilKisses4u (11-4-2004 - 12:05 AM)
| wow!1 anger. well i don't know what other see but i like your poem theres a couple of your other poems that i have read that i really like. *Heather* |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-4-2004 - 06:16 AM)
| thanks you two! theres some other cow shittting on my poetry just coz its not all depressing |
by Schizophrenic_broken (11-6-2004 - 11:31 AM)
| yeah, i love ur poems dude, and kahno can go fuck her/his self |
by dacode05 (11-6-2004 - 09:06 PM)
| kahno is undeniably talented...and his point may be that he doesn't have to fuck himself. He gets thru it and moves on. (Don't miss the answer here--get thru it and move on--makes u strong and opens new worlds to ur soul, and ur writing) |
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