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Thanks for nothing
written by Trapezium07:58 PM 11/5/04Do you think I enjoy feeling the way I do?
Do you think I love the pain I have to go through?
Do you think I adore this pain,
This self hate and unbearable shame?
Do you think I cry at night because I want to,
Or do you realise I cry over you?
Do you wonder if I enjoy this life?
I don't know about that but I love this knife.
Do you think I care about you through choice,
Do you think I love the thing in my head, this voice?
Do you notice how I'm hurting and little words make it worse?
Well some things go too far, you'll soon say hello to my hearse.
Do you I think I like when you talked all night,
About Chaz and dimmed my light.
Do you realise I still love you,
Even if what was said is true?
Do you think I torture myself for fun,
Or do you realise the prettiest thing to me is the barrel of a gun.
Do you think I'll live to see tomorrow,
Or will I overcome my sorrow?
You know the latter will never work,
Especially when you make it worse,
Do you think I laughed when you told me you had someone else?
Do you realise how that made me feel so false?
Sex is a crime in this case you know,
You're my girlfreind not a fucking ho.
Do you think I wanted to know what you'd been up to?
Do you realise I still love you?
Do you think these games need to be played?
Has my world turned to grey?
Do you think my depression is time for a dig?
You know I actually rely on my cig.
Nothing else can hold me together,
Especially when you said we would be forever.
Next day you cheat on me,
Hardly fair don't you see?
Was he just so irresistable you couldn't keep your hands off him,
Don't you realise you've committed the ultimate sin.
Hell I might as well die,
No-one wants to keep me alive.
I'm jealous well of course I am,
Would you enjoy it if someone stole your man?
Do you think you'd like it if they told you the details,
All the slimy fucking entrails? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (11-5-2004 - 08:29 PM)
| Do you think I enjoy reading this poem? |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-5-2004 - 09:23 PM)
| your pissing me off!!!! get your ass outta here you obviously dont know what a fuckin good poem is, and iff you dont fucking like it then dont fucking say anything |
by dacode05 (11-5-2004 - 11:07 PM)
| enjoy reading all u write...saddens me ur so low...keep writing cuz its worth reading when im alone in the middle of the nite hating all of the same black hearts... |
by Schizophrenic_broken (11-6-2004 - 01:54 PM)
| ergh, it has no flow or anything, and t's disgusting. One of the worst poems I everread |
by Trapezium (11-6-2004 - 05:33 PM)
| Yo Schizo, you have a problem with my poems? Just because they're much better then anything you can write, doens't mean you go around telling me all my poems are shit. You really are dumb though, you don't even know what the fuck "flow" is. There's no forced rhymes, no set number of syllables, no delibarate breaks. This poem flows almost perfectly, so you either need to learn to read or to stop shitting on work better then your own. |
by bleeder (11-6-2004 - 11:57 PM)
| WOAH... you people need to chillax and take a drag or something its poetry it cant be determined as good or bad in the eyes of anyone else cept the poet and the poet shouldnt get too cockie either like i said take a breather... jesus fucking christ |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 09:48 AM)
| ahahahahahaha bleeder, im already there, *puff puff* |
by Schizophrenic_broken (11-7-2004 - 12:20 PM)
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