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Curse this place...
written by devils angel 1308:04 PM 11/5/04Falling through this dark hole,
No one knows...no one...
not even a sole...
Curse this place...
Walking through this dark tunnel,
Not knowing which way is out...
Not knowing what my life is about,
Curse this place...
Flying through this parrallell universe,
Only to be dieing,
Only to fnd myself crying...
Curse this place...
Curse this place.... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (11-5-2004 - 08:24 PM)
| You could have said "curse this place" a few more times at the end. Perhaps five. Perhaps seven. |
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