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little red box
written by bloodlyvalentine
08:47 PM 11/5/04
no-one there to hear me
when i cried out help
no-one there to catch me
when i start to fall

been falling for so long
deeper and deeper into myself
and still no one has come along
to save me from this hell

take all the pain that i feel
and lock it away inside my heart
take all the tears
all the fears
and lock it away to never come out

hand me my little red box
a place for all my fears
you found the key to open the lock
and now im finally free


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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-5-2004 - 09:05 PM)
You should find someone to stick their "key" in your "box." It would probably be pretty nice.

by bloodlyvalentine (11-5-2004 - 09:19 PM)
*coughs* well exuuuuuuse me! get ur head outta ur ass and lets see what the fuck you can write! ass wipe

by Schizophrenic_broken (11-6-2004 - 11:34 AM)
i like ur poems, and ppl, if ur gunna say shit about her poems go fuck urself. u just cant realise real talet wen u see it

by bloodlyvalentine (11-6-2004 - 04:54 PM)
lol calm down courtney, that dude posteds shit on everyones poems,

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