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» Poem: Black Void
Black Void
written by chaoticthoughts
07:56 AM 11/7/04
I've reached rock bottom,
My suicide I am continuously plotting.
In my mind I'm slowly dying,
From my eyes everlasting crying.
My soul burns with envy,
My spirit cries, because its empty,
My heart is cold as ice,
Look into my eyes, you will see no life.
No feeling throughout my entire body,
I wish I could die and be forgotten.
Hopelessness and vulnerability overcome me,
Confusion and chaos all clutter in my mind,
No amount of pills or help will make me normal and fine.
I'm blind at my situtation at hand,
Feelings of being gaged and band.
Made too many mistakes to be forgiven,
To fucked up in the head to keep living.
The pain is too much,
My self worth is too little.
Please god take me now!
Life isn't worth living for,
Sadly, there is no cure.
What I feel inside is unbelievable,
The things I do and say are inconceivable.
I hurt myself to feel better,
But my pain will always be here,
Always and forever.


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Its long, but I would appreciate your comments on it.

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by Death Fairy (12-24-2004 - 08:49 AM)

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