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Without you two
written by Trapezium12:19 PM 11/7/04The days they seem so long,
And the nights I can't sleep at all,
I can't deal with this without you,
My two best freinds you know I miss you,
I wish there was someone I could talk to,
But the two I could just left me to fight,
They left me crying cold that night,
I remember the laughs,
And the smiles we shared,
I remember feeling like someone cared,
I hate them memories 'cause they're no longer true,
I don't know what the hell I'm gonna do,
If you left one more bullet in the barrel of that gun,
I would have used it you know that my son,
Instead my real freinds just left me to cry,
To cry over their dead bodies and wish to die,
I remember every night together,
Thinking it'd be like this forever,
And I remember the tears that filled my eyes,
When my two best freinds died. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-7-2004 - 12:33 PM)
| i'm sorry bout the stuff i've said bout ur poems b4. This is a good poem dude. |
by Trapezium (11-7-2004 - 12:37 PM)
| You're welcome, I'm sorry about flaming you about them too. Mine aren't as good as I said lol. |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 12:49 PM)
| lol, awwwww u two made up, well done *claps* *cries* |
by Schizophrenic_broken (11-7-2004 - 01:21 PM)
| kahno, i'd like to introduce you to bloodlyvalentine. she is the vampyre queen. I am her best servent. lol |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 05:31 PM)
| lol, yes u r a good servent my lil vampire!!! |
by i_love_sandy (11-7-2004 - 10:41 PM)
| will you kill me? good poem. i wish i was as good as you:)*hugs**slaps myself* sorry for the hug i bet you dont want me to ever touch you. sorry |
by Trapezium (11-8-2004 - 03:58 PM)
| And how the hell could I get to your place? I thought you were dead anyway !if you really hate me do some wierd spell and kill me yourself cuz obviously my suicide isnt suiting you and by the way i am dead! i am not human! i am a demon ok!"
That's a quote from her, take a good look and laugh |
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