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Death is a choice
written by Trapezium08:36 PM 11/7/04Death is a path we all have to take,
Death is not a mistake,
It is a blessing that no-one notices,
And when it's too late,
They're gone,
But death is a choice,
An option for a crowded soul,
If you're right you feel the way,
But I'll miss you everyday. |
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Short poem for Angela *hugs* [ View Trapezium's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 486 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-7-2004 - 08:37 PM)
thats good. It it aint to rude to ask, whos angela |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 08:43 PM)
hmmmm, interesting, though i wouldnt mind dying, i dont want to cut my life short, even tough it sucks, it just doesnt seem right |
by Darkwolfgirl (11-7-2004 - 08:53 PM)
by pAinted_Lies (11-7-2004 - 10:21 PM)
really makes you think... |
by (anonymous) (11-8-2004 - 10:40 AM)
hey babes im in litercy its gya im mgessin u wrote it last night love yha bum love alicie and alice |
by Genocide Reaper (11-11-2004 - 12:08 AM)
Bro, with the way they talk about your.'Bum' I'd guess its your chic picker upper. xD *looks at his ass* Maybe I need to get mine in shape and I can get some extra female attention. Great poem by the way...The comments sort of through me off track. |
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