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Just a little down
written by lost_cause11:15 PM 11/7/04Just a little sad today
Feelings all around
Don't know why I want to cry
Don't know why I'm down
Medicine won't seem to work
I'll never get that guy
Life is just a load of crap
I don't know why I try
Nothing really happened
I just seem to feel so bad
I wish that I could breakdown
But I'm just not that mad
I feel like I'm collapsing
Like I can't stand up or walk
I feel like I'm so broken
That I can't even seem to talk |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bluepixiebaby (11-7-2004 - 11:40 PM)
| Hey... I connected with that poem. It was awesome. Its powerful. Good job. |
by DevilKisses4u (11-8-2004 - 12:00 AM)
| wow. thats spiffyness. great poem. thats like exactly how i am feeling right now. it really like shocked me when i read it. it was like what was in my mind lol. awesome. *Heather* |
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