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» Poem: Oh my god!
Oh my god!
written by rjcww
11:42 AM 11/8/04
There are so many suicidal people. Its crazy! Why are there so many. You're problems aren';t that bad. I know you can get through them. You feel sorry for yourself and don't see a point in life, yet other people around the world suffer 10 times, no 100 times, no 1000 times worse than you. They suffer everyday, trying to earn enough money to support themselves and their family. They work hard everyday, just to survive. And you sit at your computer screen typing out fury, how all of your problems engulf your soul. So what, I ask. I've been there before, I've got through it and you can too. Don't sit around waiting for the day where you gather enough willpower to dig the knife down enough or to tie the knot, get out there and enjoy yourself. Forget your problems for a day, have some fun...cos if you don't,y you will and people will miss you, and you'll regret it!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hey, I was fed up of everyone writing about suicide, so I randomly wrote this. Please people leave messages at the bottom, especially if you feel suicidal. Thanks!

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» Comments / Feedback
by bloodlyvalentine (11-8-2004 - 05:02 PM)
you say exactly what i think man! when i first came on this site i couldnt beleive how many suicidal idiots are on here! u r totally right, i couldnt have put it better

by cg05punk (3-4-2005 - 03:08 AM)
I'm 1 of those people...

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