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too late for googbyes
written by melons05:34 PM 11/8/04| I wont to die I’m writing this to say goodbye we are fighting its frightening I love you with all my heart were falling apart they are calling me above .I hate saying bye I’m about to cry let fate decide where I go. The air is low I must go …goodbye |
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i think most of my poems r crap but u no i wona no what uz pplz think
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Sharrain (11-8-2004 - 06:47 PM)
| they are good but remember that they dont need to rhyme to be good poems. |
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