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» Poem: shadow
shadow
written by melons
05:38 PM 11/8/04
Before I was just a shadow invisible to the human eye
But hen you came along and moved the clouds from the sky
So the sun beamed down and made me whole
Because you wonted the hole world to no
That I wasn’t a ho there was a lot more to know
Your eyes light up the heaven,
Even in Devon
You made the world see what couldn’t be seen
You made them see that the grass in green
But they didn’t listen and they didn’t see
What you and me can and always will be
Me and sandy will forever be we.


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thinking of sandy

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (11-8-2004 - 06:11 PM)
aww babes, now they all know that I did steal the "we" bit :P love the poem, love you:P xx

by melons (11-8-2004 - 06:13 PM)
lol i love ur bum :P

by melons (11-8-2004 - 06:14 PM)
lol i love ur bum :P

by Bloody_Tears (11-8-2004 - 06:48 PM)
Your poem was really cool...

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