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You evil bitch
written by Trapezium08:32 PM 11/8/04Do you know how much it hurts,
When you make those comments,
Do you realise it's enough,
To tip me off the edge,
You call me a man whore,
And tell me I have more girls,
Then you have biscuits,
I can't help it,
I know what I want,
It's probably something I can't get,
You know it's all part of this,
Little fuck up called a brain,
You call me a fat fuck,
As if I don't know it's the truth,
I know I'm overweigt,
But that doesn't make you better then me,
Fuck,
Everyone's better then me,
I'm a useless bastard,
I can't remember anything,
What if I forget your face,
What if I forget how that belt feels,
What would you do then,
You call me ugly,
Well I came from you,
It's hardly my fault,
Fuck,
Everything's my fault you tell me,
Yeah it's all my fault,
You call me a faggot,
I'm not but if I was,
Isn't it up to me what I do,
In my spare time,
Fuck,
I don't have any spare time,
I'm not allowed it am I,
You call me a scrounger,
Because I lost my job,
I didn't lose it,
You lied to my employer,
I couldn't help that,
I live off £3 a week,
Barely enough for a pack of cigarettes,
Fuck,
I'm quitting that,
I'm not gonna smoke just 'cause you depress me,
I'm not gonna waste my money on you,
Hell you're no good cause,
I'd rather waste my money on pain,
Then live through this shit. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ok this is the shittest poem ever. I'm in a fucked up mood because my mum's making comments again. If you're gonna say it's shit just lay off.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mistress (11-8-2004 - 09:04 PM)
| i really liked it, it shows how u really feel, its a great poem |
by SilverHandCuffs (11-9-2004 - 12:14 AM)
| whos to decide whether or not its shit? encourage the shit people have to offer. feed off of it. use it. laugh at it. counterplay them at thier own game. the more responses you recieve. the more aknowledged you have become... its a great system. |
by (anonymous) (11-9-2004 - 02:09 AM)
| Dude(yeah this is a gurl). I love your poem it shows true fellings not that shit about how life is beauitful thats all F*** lies i love that u tell the truth dude. my best regareds to you. |
by dacode05 (11-12-2004 - 12:26 AM)
| babyboy, dont let any bunch of fucking trashrats bring you down. youve got more talent then over 3/4 of all that are listed in this entire site...I felt that fucking poem cuz in ways ive been there too...and its wrote smoothly so that its read naturally for the reader to feel it. hell, uve got my admiration and a constant click on your name to see if your next ones are here yet. |
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