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now its a memmorie
written by melons04:17 PM 11/9/04the candel was lit,
burned like a fire
its all i wonted all i desire
he is so fine he is so fit
untill one day the fire was gorn
and a new candel was born
the old one is now a ember but ,
i still remmember the light
that shon but now its gorn |
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meh its a gay one i dont think i spelt n e thing right if i havent SORRY !!!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (11-9-2004 - 04:20 PM)
| The candle was lit,
Burned like a fire
It's all I wonted all I desire
He is so fine he is so fit
Until one day the fire was gone
And a new candle was born
The old one is now an ember but ,
I still remember the light
That shone but now its gone. |
by Schizophrenic_broken (11-9-2004 - 06:16 PM)
| jesus, no 1 can spell. lol. It's wanted. not wonted. i expected more from ya kanho. lol |
by Trapezium (11-9-2004 - 07:59 PM)
| oops, ok that was all my fault. I can spell normally. |
by melons (11-12-2004 - 03:47 PM)
| it twas my falt i cant spell and never will but i can win at i love u mores:P |
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