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Invisible
written by Trapezium08:50 PM 11/9/04No-one notices me as I walk by,
Just another shadow formed by the sky.
No-one cares if I would die,
No one notices when I cry.
Do you think they care if they see me sad,
Or when they see me mad,
I'm sure they all just think I'm bad,
I'm not another passing fad.
I wonder if they see my pain,
Do they realise I have a brain,
Do they notice I live my life in shame,
The life that's dripping down the drain.
Do they care about my lifelong tears,
Do they wonder what are my fears,
Do they see the struggle through these years,
The only notice they pay me is when they jeer.
Well I've had enough of this life,
But I'm not gonna pick up this knife,
I'm not gonna commit suicide,
I'm gonna live it through all the strife.
There's so many answers I want to find,
All these questions are clouding my mind,
I remember one day I actually shined,
Now I just fade I need to unwind. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I feel invisible, like no one cares. No one does, I guess that's why. Rubbish poem mind
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-9-2004 - 08:57 PM)
| i like the poem, and i no i dunno u but every1 is special in there own way, and loads of people love you for that. DAMN, i'm useless at this councillling shit. DAMN |
by (anonymous) (11-9-2004 - 09:13 PM)
| Im sori, but im not letting you say that, because it isn't true. I care about you so much, which is why i worry all the time, which is why i love talking to you, which is why i need to make sure you're ok. You are really important to me, and i know u dont believe me when i say it but its true. There are so many things i want to say to u but i cant. I just had to tell you this, had to tell u that i care, so that u know. Even if you don't believe me, it doesnt mean it isnt true. You mean so much to me hun, just try to remeber it. Love ya, Love Lucy XxXxX |
by melons (11-10-2004 - 04:43 PM)
| hey babes very deep n flowin love yah luv ur bum :P |
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