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black sea
written by bloodlyvalentine08:55 PM 11/9/04walking into a black sea
i cant see anything
exept what in front of me
a stretch of
filthy...
black sea
deeper i go
darker it gets
and the signs are unclear
where do i go?
this way or that?
they both look the same
deep,
dark,
always black
keep moving forward
looks safe to me
i think i see the end
i never made it there
coz i drowned on my way |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i had a dream about this once.... weird.... kinda a reflection of what i was feeling back then, but not anymore
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-9-2004 - 08:56 PM)
| keep thinkin, CHEESE, and it'll all be good. lol damn i wish it wrked like that |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-9-2004 - 08:59 PM)
| lol! it does if u put a fit goth dude in there aswell, hahahahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *laughs on the floor hysterically* dang! *hahahahahahahaahhahaah* man, now im all hyper, |
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