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» Poem: Still In Love
Still In Love
written by chaoticthoughts
01:30 AM 11/10/04
I love you, but hate you,
Don't want you, but miss you,
Can't stand you, but need you,
Scared of you, but fear not knowing you,
Why am I fixiated on you?!

I try to run away, but only want to run to you,
I try to ignore you, but end up calling you,
Trying to forget you, but you always on my mind,
Trying not to love you, I wish my feelings would die.

I tried to kiss another guy,
No feeling was there.
I hate you so fucking much,
For making me feel this scared.

I have no emotions,
No concern for others,
This is all your fault.
Your keeping me from loving another.

Why did you do this to me?
Can't you see the pain inside me?
Just look in my eyes & you'll fear what you see inside.
You'll see what I see everyday, except for me it doesn't go away.
It just stares back at me,
Laughing & taunting, and your the one who made it come to be.

I love you, but hate you,
Don't want you, but miss you,
Can't stand you, but need you,
Scared of you, but fear not knowing you,
Why am I fixiated on you?!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this on 7-10-04. and all of you assholes who r like 'just get over it' try being me and you'd be writing the same shit.

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» Comments / Feedback
by VampIn626 (11-10-2004 - 01:38 AM)
i understand what you mean i feel like that too, Great poem!

by Laid2Rest987 (11-10-2004 - 01:43 AM)
ooh i like it.... i like it a lot... keep writing

by Makeshift-Suicide (11-10-2004 - 02:47 AM)
hey...oh my, i like it, makes me feel not so alone anymore when i read yalls stuff...im feeling the same way m'dear...have been for the past year or so over one guy from 8th grade...yep...im crazy...but yea keep writing, love ur stuff..laterz..KITTIE

by fallenangel1222 (11-10-2004 - 06:29 AM)
awesome poem i love it man i wish i was as good of a writer as you and yeah i feel ya on the poem i feel that way about this guy but anyways check out my stuff if you'd like and keep up the good writting take care ttyl...Stephanie

by NiteStalker (11-13-2004 - 08:56 AM)
wow... 2 sided emotions toward one love... don;t we all feel that way when we're on love w/ someone... LOVE THE POEM... the style, VERY ORIGINAL...

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