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» Poem: don't tell me that
don't tell me that
written by Schizophrenic_broken
08:02 PM 11/10/04
Do you think,
I care,
Bout your life,
how you fell out,
with your best friend,
I know I sound so selfish,
But you just had to,
mess it up.
Leave it,
That's what you said,
Put it to bed,
That's what he said,
Don't care about the guy,
you dated,
Or why your married now,
I just want to sort it out,
You didn't speak,
For a year,
Great advice for me,
(said sarcasticly)
I want to sort it out,
NOW,
Not leave it for a year,
Your so wrong,
And I know,
You're just trying to help,
But mess it up,
Is all you've done,
You made me break,
And cry,
What was I,
Suposed to say,
When you asked,
If we wanted to speak,
Should I have said,
Just how I felt,
Bout you stupid dumb ideas,
No, I sat there silently,
Listened to you,
Politly,
She'll take your advice,
Ignore me for a year,
A stupid fight,
That lead us hear,
I hate you,
You've gone and blown it.
I supose I'm half to blame,
Shouldn't have given,
The note to Him,
For you messed it up.
And I know,
I've done some stupid stuff,
But now she hates me
Even More,
Than she did before.
So I'm writing, this to say,
Thanks,
For knowing nothing,
Cuz life aint the same,
As it was in the middle ages,
And I'm sorry,
This sounds so harsh,
But you've messed it up,
So bad.
I hate this life,
I hate my school,
I hate you,
And I dont trust you,
Never will again,
Yet I'm suposed to,
But forget it,
I wont waste your time,
Next time,
I wont come to you,
For advice or help,
How to handle problems,
You just don't understand.
So if I'm suicidal,
I know that I need help,
I WONT TALK TO YOU,
If it's the last thing I do.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Bailey, I wanna be your mate again, dont wanna leave it for a year, please ignore what she said, i wanted her to sort it out and i cant accept that we're not mates

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» Comments / Feedback
by bloodlyvalentine (11-10-2004 - 08:36 PM)
wow, taylor didnt muck it up that bad, i think bailey wudnt have talked to you n e ways

by wjnSugar (11-10-2004 - 08:42 PM)
this is a good poem, u kinda make it hrd for ppl who don't read the comment to tell what it's about, but it's good

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