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» Poem: Too Cool
Too Cool
written by Asphixiation
10:55 PM 11/10/04
Sitting In my school
staring at all the damn fools
They are just too cool.


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by (anonymous) (11-10-2004 - 11:09 PM)
that is so gee

by (guest) (1-27-2005 - 07:42 AM)
yes, once again i find a poem noone else has.... that everyone can relate to! we do sit, waiting in the inertia in time, wondering could we ever pull it off? Could we be as "cool" or superior as they are. No.... we wouldnt pull it off because we are to egoistic and autonomic about our own ideas. And we beleive that what we do --- is unreliably unsophisticated, while the others and what they do is perfect. These lines show the meaning of life The meaning we are too good for ourselves, and dont give ourselves enough credit. At least thats what i absorbed from teh poem. From fredrick

by ChickenSandwich (1-27-2005 - 08:18 AM)
i completely agree..i feel im not COOL ENOUGH

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