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» Poem: Thank you
Thank you
written by XpaperdollX
12:48 AM 11/11/04
I hit myself on my last trip overdose,
I hated all this,
Never found reasons to laugh,
claw away my depression,
Nothing left,
I fell to the floor I dont care who saw me,
Im so sorry brit you where there with me,
I love you for that,
Thank you Jonh you where telling for telling me my poems where great,
You never gave them back,
That's is when I saw you sitting my jonh,
Looking at me,
I fealt my head rush back,
You handed a couple of your poems to britt,
I asked You if I could read it,
You looked at me and just looked deep in my eyes,
You let me,
I told you Id give it back,
Sitting in class reading,
Tears start burning,
You feel the same shit I do,
I saw my life and I now know it was with you,
Your the hand I was holding,
You place faith back in my heart,
Now where talking and everthing is great,
I have never been happy,
I smile and your my reason,
I love everything about you,
Your perfeact always telling me to reach my dreams,
without you I would be dead,
Thank you for everything,
You saved me I dont think you even know it.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Its not really a poem but what the hell.

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by (anonymous) (11-11-2004 - 08:50 AM)
wow....it's beautiful... at least for me...

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