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» Poem: my world...
my world...
written by devils angel 13
09:07 PM 11/11/04
Don't see anyone,
Stare off into space,
Pretend it isnt my world...
It cant be my life...

This cant be the people,
that are in my life everyday,
it feels so sereal,
so fake...

People look at me and point,
I am a freak in there eyes,
Wearing black,
Seeing blood,

Pretend to be alright,
the only way to live,
then zone everyone out,
and all the words they say...

It cant possibly be my life....but it is...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
very true, very true, sums up my world...

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-11-2004 - 09:34 PM)
Hey. Awesome poem! It really is. I wish I could write like you, and alot of the other people in here. Friggin' awesome * thumbs up * Keep up the good work!! - Corina -

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