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» Poem: questioning faith
questioning faith
written by lost_cause
01:20 AM 11/12/04
I'll tell you I love you and I hope you believe
If you were lost that's something I'd never retrieve
You mean so much more than what you think you do
Without you there I couldn't try to make it through
You are so important and I want "God" to know
I hate "him" so much for almost letting you go
If "he" tries to take you away from this life
"He" would cause way too much suffering and strife
I don't know it "he" is real or made up
I don't think I believe in this stuff
Why create us just to take things away
"He" makes it so hard for us to want to stay
"God" isn't real... I give up on this shit
Wasting my time... I'm sick of it!


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I gave up on God... I don't think he's real anymore.... And to whoever believes in him... You couldn't understand until he took something away that kept you alive..

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by The Goddess of Mutilation (11-12-2004 - 01:23 AM)
Beautiful title and I get what u mean about giving up on God and all...

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