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pain
written by melons08:17 PM 11/12/04I can feel the pain building up inside
I have tried
I have cried
All I wont to do is commit suicide
I have opened my eyes wide,
To the many time I lied
So many times I just won’t to hide
But now its hurting my pride |
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sandy helped me with this on well the last sentence lol
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloodlyvalentine (11-12-2004 - 08:23 PM)
| lots of ryming! sounds like a rap when u read it, n e ways, what is it with everyones obsession of suicide???? |
by *SyCoTiK LiL StAwKeR* (11-12-2004 - 10:19 PM)
| WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU GUYS! Why does everyone on Zenhex want to commit suicide? Why don't you do it allready? You think your life is screwed so get it over with, hang yourself, cut yourself, shoot yourself, whatever! just do it! |
by ieatsmellysocks (11-13-2004 - 01:06 AM)
| i like it,and HELLO it says "all i wont do is commit suicide".which means they WONT |
by ieatsmellysocks (11-13-2004 - 01:07 AM)
| ignore my last comment,i think i had too much crack,i like your poem tho |
by melons (11-13-2004 - 09:44 PM)
| this poem it how i felt not was i was gona do ....twat |
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