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Exalted Sympathy
written by chaoticthoughts08:25 AM 11/13/04| The state of ecstasy I undergo as the blade engraves my skin, as I follow the driplets of blood trickling down from the side of my arm. With the gloomy stare from within my soul, shining through my piercing green eyes. Overshadowing old scars with recent numbness that I'm taking into myself, with no motive. Showing the world my agony although no one seems concerned. I'm completed by this overriding high, or at least until the bleeding comes to a hault. |
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i don't know... just thinking instead of acting upon it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by NiteStalker (11-13-2004 - 08:49 AM)
| Impressive... THe way you write it, very good description... |
by chaoticthoughts (11-13-2004 - 10:38 AM)
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