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Dismal Eyes
written by chaoticthoughts10:04 AM 11/13/04| The vague expression on her face was enough to make you fall to pieces. As her gaze from her vivid green eyes, examing every inch of you, you're left to wonder what thoughts are streaming through her mind. Her stare is so steady, its alarming, its almost sinister. The perplexity in her eyes is mesmerizing, compelling and faithless. Yet at the same time she is secrete. She runs from people for the fear of being mocked. . |
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i don't know. . . . .
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dacode05 (11-13-2004 - 10:15 AM)
by chaoticthoughts (11-13-2004 - 10:24 AM)
by dacode05 (11-13-2004 - 10:52 AM)
| i will praise you...not mock you. |
by Trapezium (11-13-2004 - 11:22 AM)
| This is amazing work, it conjures vivid imaginations. Well done. |
by chaoticthoughts (11-14-2004 - 05:32 AM)
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