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» Poem: Sun-loved Smile
Sun-loved Smile
written by Trapezium
12:56 PM 11/13/04
I'll never die on my own terms, I'll control what I want in life but death is the inevitable, a path; uncontrollable. Life is the saviour of perpetual sound. Death's a continuity of life itself but the decisions are already made and the questions are all answered. In death there's no black, no white nor gray. Nothing can take the colour away. Visions of pastilles blurring your mind, streaming red lines, and yellow destructive mines. Remember the time the sun shined, and the gold-green leaves on the tree looked so free from the worries of life. The brown bark looked elegant and the grass was greener on the side you stood. That's death, with a beauty unheard of, a million angels surround you on your way each with a beauty to share, each one loves and cares. Climb the stairs, a gateway to something that doesn't exist, fall to make where you came from in the thrift. Magnesium explosion, a bright light, whiter then the night's white. Life's implosion, exactly the same corrosion. Don't end it all, 'cause it's all the same, you'll still carry the burdens, the pain, the shame. But this time you just can't get away, and everythng is forcing you to stay. I'll live my life until I die and not before, I'll live forever in my lies, just to make sure, i can be your cure and everything more. I'll be your saviour and protect you from the nights so cold, I'll be by your side until you grow old, I'll be the crease inside the fold, and your eyes will still shimmer like pure gold. We'll have a private story untold, for our eyes and our live's only. We'll live forever, together in our hearts. Once broken in places, now mended with a start. Cool blue eyes will remind me of the skies, and nothing less. Look down to see your smile and know that everything's worthwhile. Everytime you pick up that knife, just remember I'm living for your life. You'll be happy, I'll make you so. Baby I love you, just so you know. I say I'll do anything, and that's no lie. I'll do anything to cheer you up, if ever I feel you cry. A strong connection, a link with no correction. Our hearts will beat forever in our chests. I hope you'll say yes, when the time comes, and I wont press. Just to let you know This is the only thing in my life that isn't a mess. When you entered my life you know what you done, you replaced the moon with a beautiful sun, one that shines so bright it'll never fade through the night and I'll always remember those cool blue eyes, and the gorgeous sun-loved smile.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
For you, Alicia. I love you.

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» Comments / Feedback
by dacode05 (11-13-2004 - 02:02 PM)
You know what i think about this...so I won't say. *hugs you both*

by melons (11-13-2004 - 08:31 PM)
this one ... words can't describe what it means to me love u more babes

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