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Waiting
written by ieatsmellysocks04:12 PM 11/13/04A helpless look on her pale face
Shes sitting there staring into space
Shes got nowhere to go,shes always waiting there
She's just a lonely girl with blonde hair
She never smiles she never talks all she does is wait there
She's aching inside, and nobody seems to care
Her heart is broken, her wrist is bloody
Her hair is messy and her clothes are muddy
She always looks the same
In her eyes you can see her pain
She's been waiting for so damn long
She thought she could ignore it but boy she was wrong
Everyday you see her standing there
With a bloody wrist and messy hair
Wont you tell her its alright
Wont you wait with her some night
There she is just waiting there
The sad little girl with the long blonde hair
The time kept passing by
But she kept waiting until she found out it was all a lie
Always waiting in the same place
Always with the same expression on her face
The sad little girl with the long blonde hair
Smile because next time she might not be there |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I hate this poem.Its kinda about me,even though there are tons of people out there who it could fit perfectly...or something.please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DutifulAngel (11-13-2004 - 04:14 PM)
| its good but i think maybe you could format it better... |
by Trapezium (11-13-2004 - 04:17 PM)
| I think it's amazing, well done! |
by ieatsmellysocks (11-13-2004 - 04:26 PM)
| format it better?what do you mean?and thanks |
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