ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: Scars
Scars
written by ieatsmellysocks
06:14 PM 11/13/04
Theres so many things im dying to say
But i know i cant,i have to keep it locked away
I wonder if its better that way,keeping it all inside
I wonder if it was better that way,when you asked me if i was ok and i lied
Some day sometime
I'll stop hiding it
Some day i'll let you know about this broken heart of mine
Ill stop giving a shit
But until then,if you ask if im ok
Im fine is all i can say
I cant find the courage to tell you
And if i did theres nothing you could do
Just like my scars will never fade away
Neither will the pain i feel everyday


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i hate this poem,please comment

[ View ieatsmellysocks's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 389 times


» Comments / Feedback
by 4got_to_4get (11-13-2004 - 08:10 PM)
it's not bad. i acutally liked it. i can relate. i made a connection. keep up the good work.

by kat_bitch1213 (11-14-2004 - 12:13 AM)
seriously i can rel8

» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.