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I'm sorry
written by Trapezium06:14 PM 11/13/04I know and I'm sorry,
I really shoudn't have cut,
I don't know,
It felt like I was stuck.
The only way to get out,
Was to cut away the pain,
And then the plan was,
My tears would refrain.
I could live life again,
Denying anything happened,
And if someone saw my wrist,
They'd see depression's pattern.
Three gashes,
And a blood stained shirt,
A still bleeding wrist,
And an arm that's full of hurt.
All those little words you said,
Played a part in my torment,
Then the vioces on top of that,
I know I wont forget.
They told me it'll be ok,
If I made three little red marks,
Problem is that they weren't little,
I'm fed up with their remarks.
Telling me to do things,
That I just can't control,
But I will go on living like this,
I'm staying until I'm old. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Adam, if you carry on tormenting me I'll personally murder you. That's not mindless lies, it's not just a threat either. It's a promise.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by *FoReVeR*BrOkEn*69* (11-13-2004 - 08:55 PM)
| omg your poems are really good .. i wish i could write like you! but ive tried cutting to get rid of my pain and it just doesnt seem to work for me .. but oh well if thats your way i understand.. some of my friends cut when their dpressed .. but anyways- good job! |
by melons (11-13-2004 - 09:40 PM)
| nice poem but i dont like what u did i told u we can work this out and we will thats not the answer nor the question .very gd love yah bum :) |
by Dot (11-14-2004 - 01:58 AM)
| nice poem i like it .i know how u feel i do cut and my pain does go away.so i know how u feel... |
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