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» Poem: totally sorry
totally sorry
written by Schizophrenic_broken
07:50 PM 11/13/04
The notes you write,
Scar me for life,
The things you say,
Cut like a knife.

I'm hurt you dont believe me,
I'm hurt that you dont care,
But I don't bitch about you,
Hating me's not fair.

I really wish we were still mates,
But I know it'll never be,
Because I've done some shit, to hurt you,
And you keep doing shit to me.

I just want to sort it out,
Dont wannt it to be this way,
I said I'm sorry so many times,
Said sorry everyday.

And I'm sorry that I hurt you,
Sorry that I made you cry,
Bet your not sorry though,
That you made me wanna die.

I remember your words,
Can't get them outta my head,
I still feel hurt by them,
After all the shit you said.

Everynight, I go home to cry,
You've made me feel so sad,
You made me try to kill myself,
You'r still making me feel bad.

I feel like they all hate me,
Because of the stuff you've done,
You accuse me of everything,
Although I'm not the one.

I'm not the one who wrote the notes,
Not the one who said the shit,
You were the one who said that,
Yet you really cant accept it.

Don't really know what happened,
Dont know how it took this turn,
Yet you've made me so cross now.,
The fire has started to burn.

Yet I don't want to hate you,
Just want to know that your there,
I just wanna be mates again,
Just wanna know that you care.

Cuz I swear to you I'm sorry,
For all this bloody shit,
Really really sorry,
Wish you could accept it.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
much
not
Thank god
actually i dont
damn another lie
not
not
unfortunatly
damn
not
AGHHHHH
you know
Yeah,
which they do.
well actually i do
yes i do
not
not
not
stupid cow
IGNORE THE ABOVE

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» Comments / Feedback
by bloodlyvalentine (11-13-2004 - 08:02 PM)
lol, sometimes sorry isnt enough courtney, u gotta prove that u really wanna be her frend

by (anonymous) (11-13-2004 - 11:20 PM)
love it

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