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lost hope
written by bloodlyvalentine08:19 PM 11/13/04leaves,
everywhere....
on the ground
on the trees
falling from above
becoming....
a beauty in their death
fallen hopes
and fallen dreams
falling from my mind
fallen and lying
dead on the ground
all my hopes
all the dreams
blown away in the wind
scattered along the cold ground
as i watch these golden leaves
no more leaves
no more beaty
my hopes
and my dreams...
are lost
just left bare
like all the trees
and fighting against the wind |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by 4got_to_4get (11-13-2004 - 08:24 PM)
| it's really good. i really like it. keep up the good work. |
by fallin_angel (11-13-2004 - 08:33 PM)
| kewl poem!! i think that it's great!! |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-13-2004 - 08:33 PM)
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