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Save me
written by Trapezium10:26 AM 11/14/04Save me before I cut too deep,
And die between my dreams,
Dreams of dying but wanting to live,
What do these visions mean.
Lying in bed eleven thirty,
As awake as the sun in the morn,
Now I know there's nothing,
Quite like a woman scorned.
Still bleeding from 4 hours ago,
It's only just starting to seal,
But how long till my pain goes,
And I am fully healed.
One thing makes life more bearable,
But mum tries to take it away,
She tries to lose my freedom,
So I'm forced here to stay.
I'm not trying to be cool,
I just want someone to understand,
But I still want my privacy,
I can't handle more demands.
Soon I gotta go to court,
Not knowing the reason why,
What the hell have I actually done,
Well now I need to cry.
My heartbeats are earthquakes,
With each one comes a battered life,
I swear I'll never end it all,
I'll put down this knife. |
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You know who you are, Lucy.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (11-14-2004 - 10:42 AM)
| okay, you don't know me, but you do know a girl called Lucy. in fact, you 'loved her'. and now you're 'lusting' for another girl, you're fucking going out with her, and still you tell Lucy that you still love her and you know you're never gonna get her back and she'll never take you back and you have gauges in your arm because of her and it's all HER fault, you haven't done a single fucking thing wrong... *breathes* you fucker. i wanna hit you so hard. Lucy's my friend. she's beautiful, she's amazing, she's really cool, and you've fucked up her life. You better be feeling good right now. Better get ready to throw up some more of those pills, hadn't you? I'm so fucked off, you doing this, you ugly fuck, go fuck a lightswitch. I don;t even know how you can fucking live with yourself.
go cry into a bowl of meat.
anyway, have a nice day :D |
by (anonymous) (11-14-2004 - 11:33 AM)
| fucking hell, u go, i hate him 2, useless sack of shit |
by Trapezium (11-14-2004 - 11:48 AM)
| First off, the gashes in my arm are to do with Adam, not Lucy. Secondly, if you want to hit me, why the fuck don't you? Your little words actually mean very little to me, they're nothing to what I feel inside. I'm not going to delete your comments, because I know they would be of a humourous value to many on the site. My poetry comes from my heart, who're you to judge it? |
by melons (11-14-2004 - 12:08 PM)
| i agree the comments wer fucking funny love u sexy bitch |
by (anonymous) (11-17-2004 - 05:42 PM)
| w00t! Im clappin the guy who made these comments. if youi have a problem with luc, you have a problem with me too. :D alright luc see you in school tomoz ;) |
by juliasoul (11-17-2004 - 09:31 PM)
| hmm..don't know anyone who's commenting except me :-D but i like the poem. |
by Trapezium (11-18-2004 - 03:51 PM)
| Oh god I'm so scared. Sorry but I doubt any of you could do much to me. You're pathetic. Lucy can stand up for herself. I know she can, you know she can. |
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