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» Poem: Dont Say a Thing
Dont Say a Thing
written by ieatsmellysocks
12:19 AM 11/15/04
I don’t want you to say anything at all
I just want to stare at you
I don’t want your sympathy
I just want to cry here in front of you

I don’t know what to say to you
I think you knew all along
You pretended I was ok
Until you realized something was really wrong

I know that your afraid
I know your searching for some helpful things to say
I know that you don’t know what to do
I know your trying so hard as you tell me it’ll be ok

I look away
I don’t know what to say
You stare at me
Your scared of what you see

I don’t want you to say anything at all
I just want to stare at you
I don’t want your sympathy
I just want to cry here in front of you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I think this is really crappy,let me know if you think so too or not please

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» Comments / Feedback
by butterflyeffect (11-15-2004 - 12:24 AM)
I thind it's realy nice... honestly. If I thought it was crappy I would've told you. I've been cursed to be brutally honest!

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