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» Poem: Torn
Torn
written by darktinkerbell
12:36 AM 11/15/04
I'm torn
between love and hate
sadness and anger
my life has me spinning around
spinning so fast,
so dizzy
I'm senseless
I feel so helpless
even if I wanted the help.
My wonderful pride tells me
how much of a bitch I'd be
if I couldn't do it on my own
My past is locked safely inside me
I couldn't open it up
even if I wanted to
My past and the future
tears me apart
I want to let go of my past
or at least throw it into the sea
but I've been torn into so many ways
I don't think
the pieces of my puzzle
can ever be put back together


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» Comments / Feedback
by Destiny6391 (11-15-2004 - 12:55 AM)
Hey love thie poem its so awesome

by (anonymous) (11-16-2004 - 12:27 AM)
awsome

by (anonymous) (11-17-2004 - 01:52 AM)
your poem is awesome!!!!!!!

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