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Cruel Little World
written by ieatsmellysocks
12:57 AM 11/15/04
She was just a lonely little girl
Living in a cruel little world
She had nowhere to go nowhere to hide
Everyone laughed when the little girl cried
All she wanted to do was commit suicide
Lots of people knew but they didn’t care
They just laughed at her and said life isn’t fair
Just laughed at the little girl with messy blonde hair
Told her to go home but no one was there
She got older and got hurt even more
Everyone laughed at her like before
She had nowhere to go to she didn’t care anymore
She was just a lonely teenage girl
Living in a cruel little world
Nowhere to go nowhere to hide
Everyone laughed when the teen cried
She just kept living like that till she committed suicide
Nobody even knew she had died
Except one little boy who had beaten her up when she cried
He was just a guilty little kid
He never told anyone about what he did
He had nowhere to go nowhere to hide
Everyone laughed when the little boy cried
That’s how he lived till he committed suicide
And the lonely little girl had been waiting for the boy when he died
Now there together broken inside


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» Comments / Feedback
by darktinkerbell (11-15-2004 - 01:01 AM)
That is a really good poem, I love it, oh and you commented on my poem"let it go" I know it's not easy to let things go, it 's just tearing me up that "he" thinks about it all the time

by cutelilttlechick09 (11-15-2004 - 01:13 AM)
wow. great poem! i love it.

by butterflyeffect (11-15-2004 - 01:17 AM)
This is a realy good poem. Good job!

by darklover666 (11-15-2004 - 09:36 AM)
wow awsome peom .

by .::forbidden::. (11-15-2004 - 09:00 PM)
this poem is amaizing !! seriously

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