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together
written by bleedblack01:45 AM 11/15/04hold me tighter than ever before
don't let me fall to the cold floor
i need you now more than ever
please keep me here, don't let me sever
don't let me fall from my mistake
save me from what i thought was fake
i need you here to tell me its ok
i can't go on without you everyday
blood is still pouring from my wrists
help me, deaths starting to insist
you say "i love you and i'm going too,
i have to because i can't live without you"
you tell me this with tear filled eyes
you refuse to say our last goodbyes
so you pick up the knife that betrayed me so
and with one slit your life starts to go
you lay next to me and say "i love you"
as i continue to cry i say "i love you too"
so together we fade into the unknown
together we start this journey on our own |
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disterbing i think ... comment please
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| » Comments / Feedback | by darklover666 (11-15-2004 - 09:24 AM)
| o my fuking god thats teh best peom ive red on here can u please send me a copy of that its so fuking good i cant belive it.thatks |
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