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» Poem: CONSOL
CONSOL
written by Deadkittycat
06:39 AM 11/15/04
I wanna feel it
this pain inside of me
I cant deal with it
stalking behind me
spying on me
its distroying me
my depression its deploying me
speading and weaving inside out of friends
my heart starts to beat inside my head
razor slices through my skin again
mmm this wonderful bliss stems
growning further to my extent
until I cant control it again
the razor is my consol
I cant stay here
I need to go
I just need to be whole.


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by Shyla (11-15-2004 - 06:44 AM)
This is a really well-written poem. I like the ending the best, it is very powerful and finished the poem nicely.

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