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so tired
written by bloodlyvalentine07:42 PM 11/15/04so tired...
my eyes wont shut,
but im so tired...
i cant sleep
so tired...
my eyes have
bags under them,
so tired
of being alone,
so tired...
of hearing the same old,
so tired...
of everything,
everyone,
and maybe...
i'll just give up
and die
in the end...
in the end,
when it comes |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dun feel like this myself, but i just wrote it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Becki (11-15-2004 - 10:17 PM)
| i think its great dont really get how you could of wrote it without feeling it though i think i liked it so much cos thats how i feel |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-16-2004 - 07:00 AM)
| yeah, i used to feel a bit like that, i know someone who feels like that, too |
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