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Promised Change
written by IceBound04:08 PM 11/16/04Change is constant
change this seed
True i didn't want this
true now it feeds
From the inside
from me, it won't let go
Within me, thoughts collide
within, the cold, it flows
I try hard everday to just get by
I see my false image and still try to deny
Know that i'm will to die
know my false hope, try not to lie
It's the pain i endure
it's this fucking heartache!
You are my only pure
you, the only thing i can not fake
I swore, i promised
I swore that day
Love, i want this
love you this way |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
if you look at the begining words of every two lines; it says: Change True From Within I Know It's You I Love...
just thought that was kinda cool
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-16-2004 - 04:42 PM)
by sweetsoutherngal (11-16-2004 - 07:15 PM)
| Very cool! I would have never noticed. Thanks for that great poem. |
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