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» Poem: Cant you see
Cant you see
written by ieatsmellysocks
10:49 PM 11/16/04
Im the one that stares at you all day
Im the one that tells everyone to go away
Im the one whos having trouble quitting self-harm
Im the one with a bleeding arm

Im the one whos bandaids I got you to sign
Im the one who cried to you, those tears were all mine
Im the one who in class almost passed out
Im the one you don’t give a damn about

Im the one who watches everything you do
Im the one that’s so in love with you
Im the one who cries alone at night
Im the one you asked “are you alright”

Im the one who needs your help
Im the one who hates herself
Im the one that no one loves
Im the one that no one hugs

Cant you see that im the one
The one that’s hated by everyone
Cant you see I need your help
Cant you see what ive done to myself


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by (anonymous) (11-17-2004 - 12:01 AM)
this is one of the best poems i have read, in a while, probably because i feel this way, however it's cool in the sence that a lot of people have gone through it but in a different eviorment.

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