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» Poem: Visions in my sleep
Visions in my sleep
written by devils angel 13
07:51 PM 11/17/04
Look into the sky,
Let the sun burn my eyes,
How did I let it all happen???
Why?

Couldnt I have warned them?
That he was going to die?
These premonotions in my sleep
They make me feel numb...

Maybe I should have warned them,
Maybe I could have helped him,
But then again I tried,
And he said he felt just fine...

I tried to tell him softly,
To save him all the pain,
But he wouldnt even listen,
Now hes dead...

He fell asleep one night,
Feeling good and fine,
Then died a very quick death,
He never woke up in the morning...

Still feel like its my fault,
I knew it was going to happen,
But there wasnt a way to save him,
And that was all the trouble...

I stare at the sun
My eyes becoming blank,
The blackness feels so sweet....
I blink hard, and open my eyes...

I couldnt stopped it...
At least he felt no pain...


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