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MY FEARS ARE REAL...
written by devils angel 1308:02 PM 11/17/04Panting breathing way too hard,
RUnning away from him,
HE chased me all the way here...
I am going to die...
Darkness surronds me,
Cant see my hand in front of my face,
Sweat running down my cheeks,
This is my fate...
Water is in front of me,
I can feel the wetness,
I hear screaming behind me,
I need to get away.
I run the side of the river,
And I really cant see...
I see a figure in front of me,
It is a ghost...
The ghost isnt evil,
It is welcoming me to death,
He say "See you soon,"
And dissapears...
Darkness once again,
Fear surronds me...
The man kidnappend me,
and brought me here...
But before I can think anymore,
I feel two hands push me,
I land in the water...
I cant breath...
The person holds me underm
I cant breath at all,
My lungs callapse...
I am dead... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
LAst night my mom and my aunt talked about this phycic that said she thinks that our fears are there because we experienced them in real life... Like (my mom was saying) I am afraid of drowning, and they lady says that means that I drowned in a past life... Thats really freaky...so I thought about my fears and stuffs and i came up with...kidnapping, murder, too much darkness, too much light, ghosts, drowning, and fires... So thats what this poem is about...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by GreyFlame (11-17-2004 - 08:23 PM)
| That is an interesting story there. I like your poem, its different, and full of suspense. Great Job |
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