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» Poem: help me please**
help me please**
written by devilchild01
08:58 PM 11/17/04
I’m slowly fading away
Can you not see that?
You say you love me
Yet you cant see feelings i hide
Don’t you know I’m breaking?
I want to scream out
Help me someone please

I have fallen down a hole
I can’t climb out
Can you not help me out?
Please cant you try
I need some help
I’m asking for it aloud
Can no one hear me?

As the days turn to weeks
And the weeks to months
I’m falling apart inside
Im losing every piece of my mind
Pieces I wanted to keep forever
Pieces I cant get back.
They are disappearing so fast.

I’m so confused
Should i listen to the voices?
They say i should die
They say you would be better without me
I think this is true but im not to sure
I want to do what is right.
I don’t want to go but what choice do I have.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-20-2004 - 08:26 AM)
wow this one is good too :D u are very good at poems u should make alot more :D.

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