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» Poem: Dreams
Dreams
written by ieatsmellysocks
11:40 PM 11/17/04
You’ve stopped asking me if im alright
Im still dreaming of you every night
I’d kill myself for you as dumb as it seems
I never want to wake up when you star in my dreams

You know im watching every thing you do
I cant help it you know im so in love with you
When im around you I feel like I don’t have to hide
Everything ive always kept deep inside

Every morning I only get up in hopes that I may see you
I wish I could always feel how I feel when im with you
In my dreams your everywhere
I just need to know if you care

The look in your eyes shows me your afraid
My bruises dissapear and my cuts fade
I feel as if im flying when im with you
But falling when im not,and theres nothing I can do

You’ve stopped asking me if im alright
Im still dreaming of you every night
I miss the days when you were there
I miss knowing that you actually care


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This poem makes me want to puke...please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-18-2004 - 10:41 AM)
I love this fucken poem! If I would've read it like a month ago I would've laughed at you and said you suck... but I feel the same way towards someone right now so I understand you

by Elariel (11-30-2004 - 11:51 PM)
I like this poem. I reminds me of a painful time in my life that continues to haunt me.

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