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10 pills
written by bleedblack04:17 AM 11/18/04pop one pill
to make the pain stop
pop two pills
to make myself drop
pop three pills
to numb all the pain
pop four pills
to erase my shame
pop five pills
to make you go away
pop six pills
to not see another day
pop seven pills
to make myself forget
pop eight pills
to have no regret
pop nine pills
to make my thoughts of you secede
pop ten pills
till death i succeed |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by shebillah (11-18-2004 - 04:24 AM)
by hatedandused (11-18-2004 - 04:32 AM)
by letmewatchyousleep (11-18-2004 - 04:48 AM)
| very good i love the poems people write which are interesting and different |
by devilchild01 (11-18-2004 - 06:15 PM)
by Trapezium (11-20-2004 - 07:10 PM)
by Foiazzy (11-27-2004 - 09:06 PM)
by brighteyes1357911 (1-21-2005 - 06:49 PM)
| very nice, xtreamly different. |
by LostNhate666 (3-31-2005 - 05:17 AM)
| The poem ten pills ment alot to me i have been there...and i'd like it if i could talk to you...im sorry if this is akward but it really ment a lot to me... |
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