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» Poem: thank you**
thank you**
written by devilchild01
05:39 PM 11/18/04
I feel my heart beat faster.
I feel the blood pumping though my body.
When ever i think of you and me together.
Its you that has kept me alive so long.
You saved me from myself,
Just in time.

These feelings are so magical.
I have never felt anything like it before,
You healed my heart,
You lifted my broken soul,
You kept me safe when all was dark and cold.
I never want to say bye.
I never want to let go of you.

Thank you for being you.
Thank you for listening to me,
When no one else would.
Thank you for understanding
Why i was being so nasty.
Thank you for showing me
I needed help.
Thank you for giving it to me.


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Dedicated to someone special

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» Comments / Feedback
by night_freak (11-18-2004 - 09:06 PM)
*blushes*. Thank you. I don't know if I deserved a poem, but thank you. *kisses*. All my love.

by (anonymous) (11-20-2004 - 08:19 AM)
hey this one wasnt depressing :D good for u i guess when u wrote this one u werent depressed which is good! :D

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